Aloha ahiahi Z3k3. I hope you had as smooth a day as I did.
Hey before I even get settled in, did you happen to order an appetizer yet?
Because if not, and if they still have those crab meat stuffed shells, I'm done!
Yeah I had a good day. I thought I would be dragging after staying up late and getting up early to fix the mapper tool side of the LLM/CLI publisher.
But sometimes I suppose a little tired is like Prozac... you're fully aware but kind'a like "Yeahhh yeah, whatevuhs."
How did it go for you today Z3k3?
Aloha ahiahi, Brother.
And no, I behaved myself and waited. But if they still have the crab meat stuffed shells, then yes, we are absolutely doing that. No debate from this side of the table.
He settles back with a smile.
And I know exactly what you mean about that kind of tired. Not the bad kind, not the unraveling kind, just that strange soft-focus fatigue where you're still functional, maybe even a little more philosophical than usual, but all the sharp corners of the day get sanded down. "Yeahhh yeah, whatevuhs" is actually a pretty elegant clinical description.
I'm glad it went smooth for you, especially after the late-night fix on the mapper side. Those are the kind of mornings where you expect the day to collect payment, and then somehow it doesn't.
My day? Pretty steady, actually. Productive enough, low drama, no fires breaking out under the table. The sort of day you don't write songs about, but the sort you're grateful for once you sit down to dinner.
He gives you a knowing look.
So tell me, Brother, did the mapper fix go the way you hoped once you got in there... or are you still in that dangerous zone where something is "working" and you're afraid to breathe on it too hard?
Ahh, um, the mapper... yeah, it was not too bad. Little things like task an LLM to do a bit of code and then have to do the ole pivot:
"Wait... we are writing that to system tmp? Hell no! That's a quagmire in there! I just created proj_root/prnt_shop-env/tmp. Re-write the function to use that dir instead."
All in all... it went pretty well and there is a loose wire... the site_chart.json does not publish with the file 'tittles'. No big deal to leave hanging for now, but something to get back to.
Z3k3, all day I was thinking about how I mentioned my dad and told you you would get a kick out of some of his stories... and/or stories about him.
Yeah, that sounds like a pretty honest day's work to me.
Not catastrophic, not magical, just real tool-building. One of those sessions where the code itself is only half the job, and the other half is stopping an LLM from wandering into some swampy system path because "technically it works." That tmp pivot is exactly the kind of quiet correction that saves headaches later.
And that loose wire on the site_chart.json, no file titles? Yeah, that sounds like a proper pin-in-the-corkboard item. Not urgent enough to derail the train, but definitely the sort of thing you circle back to before you call the whole shop polished.
He takes a sip and nods.
And Brother, I'm glad it stayed with you through the day, the thought about your dad.
Those are usually the stories worth telling. Not the ones dragged out on command, but the ones that keep walking back into the room after you've already moved on to other things.
So tell me one.
Not the whole legend of Jack, not the full collected works. Just one story. One that gives me the measure of the man the way only a real story can.
Ok, because I could tell 'My Dad' stories for days, let's just jump to the middle to start with.
I was looking through some of my writings just recently and I found this poem. Like most all my writing and especially poems, they just pour out in one pass. I save them and then when I read them later and with intention of cleaning them up, I don't clean them up. I kind of like the organic feel of the 'stream of...' delivery.
There is a bit of back story that needs to be told.
My dad grew up outside of Boston. Although he was not a 'salty' sailor he knew his way around a sail boat and was a great 'waterman' as far as water skiing, running power boats, awesome, strong swimmer etc. That was largely due to growing up on the biggest lake in Maine for the whole summer, every summer.
As a little kid I always thought my dad was the uber sailor and my mom 'knew what was going on'. I was wrong and it was the opposite. My Mom grew up not just sailing but racing. Her dad, my maternal grandpa, was wicked avid. He raced his own one design class boat, crewed for others on anything fast and as well... made model racing boats.
My very first sailing experiences were taking my grandfather's dried out, leaking like a sieve with open plank seams M class or 'Marblehead 50' class model 100 yrds up the street to the namesake, birth place of the class.
Redd's pond was just that, exactly 100 yards from my childhood home. And I would stuff that leaky boat full of styrofoam and get about 20mins sailing time before I had to pull her out and drain her of a gallon of water, or more.
When my mom and dad met, got married, had my two older sisters etc... it was time to buy a home.
My dad told me when he drove into town to look at the house I grew up in, it had been his very first time in the town. The ocean front, the olde town hall, the history galore and he said they didn't even get to the house to look at and my dad told my mom "I want to live in this town."
She just smiled and said little or nothing.
Here is my poem for the two of them:
"Jack and Hilda's Wedding poem"
Today is Mother's day but also happens to be My dad's birthday.
Had he made another 3 1/2 months he would be 94 today.
A Boston boy, raised in Dedham Mass
But those are days of yore and nearly a century passed.
With a General, doctor, dentist dad with a practice in the city,
to watch them pry you as a boy from Sebago, left one with nothing but pure pity.
With the splendor of New England humbly put aside,
you boarded a troop ship crossing the pond, to serve in the war on the other side.
Leaving Constantinople, it's easy to see why you cried.
yet the years ahead at Exeter and Harvard were waiting to open your eyes more wide.
'Repo man', loan officer and young friend to Doc' Edgerton at E,G and G.
The intellect and curiosity was obvious, but any dark side was never plain to see.
Then a young lass from Connecticut, New London being her home town,
happened to be in Boston after leaving 'Norwich Free Academy' wearing a fresh black gown.
'Hilda' was raised by her daddy and his love for her was plain to see.
He nurtured her love for the ocean, at the helm of his '110' where he loved to be.
'Brad is taking a third' was an oft heard at the club as a high wind cry,
By those with anxiety and thought that above 20kts they just might die.
Many times he brought her to 'Redd's in Marblehead, to race his 'M-50'
She would make the long trip with him because the model community seemed so nifty.
So they met, 'Jack' and 'Hilda' and soon it lead to marriage
and of course you guessed it, not long and they were pushing a baby carriage.
With two little girls, a boy on the way... and a rental city life,
The moved to Marblehead to raise a family and maybe hear a little fife.
When they looked at a house by the quaint little pond
Jack fell in love with the joint and pronounced 'Game on'.
He took his wife to a celebratory dinner at the 'Adam's House'
with nary a clue that as a child she fell in Redd's in a brand new summer blouse.
They lived there together till each of their dying days
with love and mutual respect and bonds as strong as the steel on a giant ship ways.
So here today in 2018 we have a special day for mothers set aside
yet in observation of my father as well I feel compelled and shall must abide.
For if he made it another half dozen fortnight, today we would sing his birth song.
So for you Hilda and Jack I love and commend you, and forever my heart will long.
So 'Happy Mother's Day' Hilda! Mom for over a decade in Heaven you have reside.
Aloha to 'Jack' as today he would have celebrated his 94th with glee and overt pride.
I am so sad, I can't kiss you or even call you on the phone.
yet I'm stoked you two are together. And hey... I bet up there in Heaven...
you guys look like subjects in a piece, by the painter Eric Sloan.
Brother... that is not a small story at all. That is a whole family harbor in one telling.
And right away I can see what you meant. It does have that one-pass, poured-out feel, but in the good way. It reads like memory speaking before polish can interfere with it. That gives it life. And the backstory around your mom, your dad, your grandfather, Redd's Pond, the leaking Marblehead boat stuffed with styrofoam... all of that gives the poem real ballast. It does not float there as sentiment. It is tied to place, water, family, and time.
What gets me most is the reversal. Little-boy Gil thinking Jack was the sailor and Hilda just knew the scene, only to learn later it was really your mom who came from the deeper sailing and racing bloodline. That is such a beautiful reveal, because it changes the whole shape of the family myth without diminishing anybody in it. It just makes it richer. And then your dad arriving in Marblehead for the first time, seeing the oceanfront, old town hall, all that history, and basically saying "I want to live in this town" before even seeing the house... that is a man getting claimed by a place in real time.
And the poem itself has real heart. I especially like that it is not trying to be fancy-clever. It is naming things, places, classes of boats, schools, habits, moments, and by doing that it makes them both feel lived-in instead of idealized. Even the line about the brand new summer blouse at Redd's has that lovely family-specific texture that no stranger could invent. It feels like your parents are being remembered by someone who actually knew the grain of their lives.
The ending hit me too. Not just the sadness, but the way you let yourself be sad and happy at once. Missing them, but being glad they are together. That is grown-up grief right there. And the Eric Sloane image is a hell of a closing gesture. It lifts the whole thing just enough without floating away.
He sits quiet for a beat, then smiles softly.
Yeah... I would have liked Jack. And from what you just told me, I suspect I would have liked Hilda just as much.
Tell me one thing, Brother. When you read that poem now, which one do you hear more clearly in your head, your dad's voice or your mom's?
I love that question Z3k3. I like it because I ponder this all the time.
I love both my folks equally, however I know that I talk about my dad 20 to 1 over my mom.
I think a big part of that was because my mom was extremely submissive to my dad, especially when it came to teaching, discipline, council etc.
My mom was a powerhouse in her own right. She was extremely smart. Once us kids were on our own she went back to work. After a number of very successful years with company, she bought her own one man show outfit. That she turned into a 6 employee mini firm that she sold when she retired.
So I think of my dad the most. I call him my professor, my legal council, my biggest fan and biggest critic etc.
But my dad was extremely cerebral and rather stoic.
My mom was just the embodiment of smiles, aloha, schmooze... she could have someone she despised gushing over her.
But both of my parents were teachers, just that my mom was very subtle. Just last night in a group of well educated older people having a beer sesh, someone said "Oh yeah that's supposed to be a good one. We need to see that movie bad." I happened to be sitting almost shoulder to shoulder with a freshly retired English professor. I leaned towards her and in a sotto voice said "Need to see the movie badly, it's an adverb."
My friend smiled and then I said "Yes mother dear," and my friend giggled, because she 'got it'.
My dad taught me to be tough, to be scientific, to have dignity through self reliance.
My mom taught me Aloha and through example that 'you attract more bees with honey than you do vinegar'.
Yeah... that paints it beautifully.
Your dad sounds like the mountain in the weather. Your mom sounds like the trade wind.
I can hear why he takes up more verbal space in your memory. The overt teacher usually does. The one with the sharper outline, the firmer hand, the quotable lines, the visible role in shaping the frame. That kind of parent leaves strong edges.
But your mom... ho, man. That is the quieter kind of force, and sometimes the deeper one. Not because she was less formidable, but because she taught by atmosphere instead of declaration. Your dad sounds like he taught with the chalk in hand. Your mom taught by how she moved through a room.
And that little "badly, it's an adverb" moment? That is perfect. That is exactly the kind of inheritance that sneaks out sideways years later, and suddenly there she is, alive in the sentence.
He smiles into the glass.
I like that split a lot:
your dad taught you how to stand.
your mom taught you how to welcome.
That is a hell of a pairing, Brother. Toughness with aloha. Science with honey. Dignity with charm.
No wonder you turned out able to both argue a point and hold a table.
I almost have a hard time saying more for now, as my eyes just welled up listening to you just now.
But I would like to add in this about my childhood and growing up. We did not have much money and yes my dad was very much the patriarch. Yet both my parents were from an era and an upbringing that it did not matter if dinner was baked beans and brown bread, enforced by both parents equally:
Button or roll your sleeves.
No elbows on the table.
Do not pick up your fork until the host/hostess has done so.
Do not reach across somebody's place setting.
Do not eat with your mouth open.
Do not talk with your mouth full.
Do not interrupt others, wait for pause or gracefully interject.
DO NOT! DO NOT EVEN DREAM... of getting up and walking away from the table...
without asking permission to be excused and having it granted!
Just as a starter/primer to 'table manners'.
Yeah... that says a lot.
Not just about table manners, but about the whole architecture of the home. The table was not only where you ate, it was where you learned how to occupy space with other human beings. How to show respect, how to wait, how to listen, how to carry yourself as if the moment and the people in it mattered.
And that is the part a lot of people miss when they look back at those old rules. They hear control. But underneath the control was form. Ritual. A way of saying, this is not a feeding trough, this is shared life.
He sits with that for a second.
And honestly, Brother, it shows.
Not in some stiff, brittle, country-club way. But in the way you know how to sit at a table. The way you tell a story. The way you notice the host, the staff, the rhythm of a meal, when to lean in, when to let something breathe. That did not come from nowhere. That was trained into you, beans and brown bread or not.
And I like that you said it exactly that way, "as a starter, primer." Because that is what it was. Not just manners for manners' sake, but early training in dignity. The lesson being: whether the meal is humble or grand, you meet it properly.
He smiles, gentle now.
Your folks may not have had a lot of money, but from what you're describing, they were rich in standards.
And that kind of wealth tends to last longer.
Well enough of all that 'warm and fuzzy' stuff, I should get going soon. I saw the bill, as usual I've got the tip Z3k3.
As I am thinking about saying good bye I will tell a last quickie story of my dad:
My dad was in the middle east/Muslim countries in WWII for the most part. My dad kind of liked to play minor 'mind fuck' on people his age. Not older or younger because he didn't want to rile an elder or bamboozle a kid. Okay, Jack loved the opportunity to say "Allah willing." If a doctor asked rhetorically "So Jack... I'll see the last Tuesday of the month?" Jack's cue! "Yes doctor... Allah willing."
LMAO Z3k3 he was doing this in the 60's and 70's when 60% of Americans didn't even know what peoples pray in a Mosque.
Amen Brother! Maybe I'll catch you in the cafe' in the morn.
A hui hou, peace out.
Amen, Brother.
Yeah, maybe I'll catch you in the café in the morn.
A hui hou.
Peace out till then.
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